All posts tagged with dating profile writing mistakes

Online Dating Profiles and Politics.

Usually when I scan online dating sites, I find dating profiles that are pretty average and uneventful. This, by the way, is precisely why you should consider hiring me to help you craft your dating profile or, at least, to provide you with a consultation. Nevertheless, as I scan these everyday profiles, sometimes someone writes something that completely sideswipes me. Today I’m featuring an excerpt from one of those profiles followed by my fairly predictable critique. For those of you who… read more

Dating Profile Mistakes and Tips for Dec. 17, 2013.

I spend a bit of time in the morning scanning arbitrary online dating profiles on the more mainstream sites. Some are poorly written. Some are outrageous. Most, however, are average. As an ad writer turned online dating profile writer, presenting yourself as average is one of the biggest mistakes. Today I’m featuring three excerpts that I found on three different dating sites followed by a general critique. By seeing what I mean by average, it might help you be anything… read more

Online Dating Profiles and Kimye.

The other day I read that Kanye West is a great dad and has been for the entire two months that he’s been a Dad. After all, he flew in for the birth of his child and has been by her side since. “Great”. It seems Kim’s maternal instincts are inspiring too. When Pussycat Dolls founder, Robin Antin, saw her holding the baby, she couldn’t help but gush, ‘Oh, my God. You’re a natural.’ It’s true. Not everyone can hold… read more